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Sunday, October 26, 2008

Tracking The Early Year: New Mexico Boy Part II

(Part one of this non-saga lives here).

"New Mexico Boy" was pretty fully formed by the time I was playing it out a lot, but it's actually gone through a few major "renovations," if you will, to get it to the version you hear on The Early Year.

It's a long song. It has five verses. That's indulgent, but I like them all, so I wasn't going to chuck anything out. It got its first facelift when I was at the Life's A Song workshop with Terri Hendrix. We got some one-on-one time with Terri to go over whatever we wanted, and I played her this song. She had the same assessment about the length. At that time the chorus was:

Drunk on Friday, home by 2 AM
Mass on Sunday, bread and wine again

You wonder who's your saint

Cuz sure as hell you ain't

Does confession to the Mother bring you joy

New Mexico Boy?


When you sing that 3 times, it makes your long song even LONGER. Terri drew some lines through the "saint/ain't" lines and said that's what needed to go. She was right. But I still LOVED that line.

I went over that with Dan and he suggested those lines could be moved to the bridge, which at the time was kind of taking up redundant space:

Airport's running out of planes
Scared you won't wake up the same

Airport's running out of planes


So not only do I have this really long song but I'm REPEATING myself. Right. A little cut and paste and we ended up with what you hear now:

Airport's running out of planes
Scared you son't wake up the same

You wonder who's your saint

Cuz sure as hell you ain't


And it worked, and it was all there, and the choruses were shorter, and the heavens parted and birds sang. Well, in my mind, anyway. This songwriting stuff is hard work.

New Mexico Boy Lyrics

superheroes, superstars
live so far from where you are
where crazy things fall from the sky
but nothing's shown you how to fly

cruise all night and sleep 'til noon
tortillas, juice, and old man gloom
spread butter on your daddy's bread
turn off the news, go back to bed

drunk on friday, home by 2 am
mass on sunday, bread and wine again
does confession to the mother bring you joy?
new mexico boy

no history you care to claim
no county kickbacks in your name
just a pack of dreams rolled up your sleeve
to make it big you'll have to leave

drunk on friday, home by 2 am
mass on sunday, bread and wine again
does confession to the mother bring you joy?
new mexico boy

airport's running out of planes
you're scared you won't wake up the same
you wonder who's your saint
'cause sure as hell you ain't

cinderblocks like hollow hearts
stacked up in piles along boulevards
a fortress in your own hometown
but this ain't china, walk around
no this ain't china, walk around

drunk on friday, home by 2 am
mass on sunday, bread and wine again
does confession to the mother bring you joy?
new mexico boy

Words and Music by Jana Pochop
© 2008 Patient Grasshopper Music (ASCAP)

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